Ja-bez's 100wc


Once there was a man named Rick. He was an astronaut. He liked to study the moon, all sorts of stuff. Like measuring the moon. Learning the shape of the moon. Stuff like that. He would show up on TV sometimes. I do not know why - maybe he is famous for studying  the moon. And also he is good at repairing rockets. When I grow up I hope I can be like him. He is the best. Maybe he makes robots that go up into space. Soon the sun was burning on them so they went to the moon.

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  1. Anonymous30 July 2019 at 16:21

    i really like how you are talking about the sun was burning us cool i like it

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  2. Anonymous30 July 2019 at 16:22

    good job ja-bez.

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  3. Anonymous30 July 2019 at 16:29

    I enjoyed reading it very funny!

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  4. Anonymous30 July 2019 at 16:34

    i really like how you worked so hard on this story

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